New Member Handout

[livedj1173]

i see no obivious errors....
but we need to have this figured out so we can get it printed

[Tanner]

i see no obivious errors....
but we need to have this figured out so we can get it printed

My Dad will print it at Howards on Monday.

-Tanner

[Sunny]

i see no obivious errors....
but we need to have this figured out so we can get it printed

Should be obvious.

Cool beans.

[ptwortman]

Just some smaller errors that I found.

- Our Mission: "Peachtree Ridge High School Robolions exists..." should be "exist".(Actually, should probably make it "The Peachtree Ridge...") Sounds better.
- Our Mission: "It allows students and mentors..." Pronoun issue, should be "they".
- Fast Facts: "Founded in 1989", FIRST was founded in 1992.
- FAQs: "I'm interested to join", I think it should be "I'm interested in joining..." Maybe Patrick can double check that.
- Team Basics: "...we have a few exceptions..." Should be expectations. ( I think this is what's bugging Patrick).
- Team Basics: "Reliable & actively contribute..." I believe it should be "Reliably & actively..."

Still looks good.

Also...anyone heard anything about the NC regional??? According to CD, the news was made official a little while ago. Anyone wanna go to a 3rd regional???

i agree
lol

and why not put this: "FIRST was founded in 1989, though the official competitions did not begin until 1992." or something like that

[Tanner]

and why not put this: "FIRST was founded in 1989, though the official competitions did not begin until 1992." or something like that

Eh, it is just fast facts. If they want "slower facts" that are in a few paragraphs, they can goto the FIRST site.

-Tanner

[Tanner]

Last update before printing, added dates for Peachtree and Palmetto.

-Tanner